I’m starting to think you don’t love me.
At least not in the way that she does.
I was excited for us to be a family,
For us to grow together,
To become something beautiful.
And when you put me outside you said it was so I could feel the sunlight,
So I knew you cared,
Even though it was always cloudy.
And when you began to water me less I knew you didn’t want me to drown.
But my withering leaves aren’t your concern anymore.
And I can’t ask you for help.
My knotted roots are anchored deep.
They keep me here
though pieces of me fade away,
Fall and die.
They surround me and I can see what you took.
Will I ever be who I am supposed to be now?
Do you even know my name?
You say I’m important to you.
But not in the way you promised.
You celebrate my weakness.
Collecting my tattered leaves and
Setting them ablaze.
And I was happy to keep you warm.
But as you basked in the heat of my misery she came to me.
And she gave me water.
I had forgotten the taste.
My hardened edges smoothed.
I stood taller.
You noticed.
Remembering again the flower you planted months ago.
An Iris.
You see why she tended to me now.
You want me back after seeing my worth.
Do you care again?
Will you love me when I’m pretty?
But how long until your interest in me fades?
How long will it be until the maintenance of keeping me is not worth what I can offer you?
Why do I waste time asking questions I know the answer to.
In your eyes I’m just beautiful kindling.
- Ellie Pellecchia

Ellie, I loved how you put this poem from the perspective of your plant! You explained how it sees itself to its owner. Even though it was from a planet’s point of view, it was very relatable. My favorite line was, “You want me back after seeing my worth.” I related that back to my life when people used to “use” me. It was only until after they noticed I was trying to kind. This poem was easy to read and placed together perfectly.
– Molly Corrigan
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Wow oh wow I adore this poem. The fact that it is from the plants perspective is so perfect for this. You went so far into detail on the intricacies of its thoughts and life and really gave the plant such depth I love it. I also think you took the perfect picture that reflects the essence of the story of the poem. When you said,
“I was excited for us to be a family,
For us to grow together,
To become something beautiful.”
I love this part because it reflects how you did such an awesome job giving the tree not just simply a consciousness but a deeper meaning and philosophical thought in a way. This poem had a fun story and also provoked thought. Awesome job!
-Caroline Erlandsen
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